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Robot gurl

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Collaboration!

Drawn by ~Lenore199 Colored and shaded by ME!

Please tell me what you think of the coloring/shading, I want to improve.
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I'd write a critique, but I'm not Premium so I'll just do it this way. xD

Since you ask, I'ma give you the most honest opinion I can. It's not bad, especially for a beginner. The fact that you don't make classic beginner's mistakes like leaving white pixels really shows. You have an eye for what looks right, which some people don't seem to, haha.

A couple of things I'd point out: The lineart is pretty nice, but if I were you I'd pay more attention to places like the fingertips and places where lines come together and try to connected them more carefully, it would look even nicer. There are a lot of gaps in the lineart and places where one line overshoots another where they come together.

Also, I would exaggerate the shading a little. I had to tilt my monitor to be able to see that there was even any shading on the light blue areas. Try shading with a darker color, and adding highlights with an even lighter color.

That's just my nit-picky-honest opinion. ;D